You can start this thought with "furthermore" (which you can keep in your final draft here and there. Instead of saying someone walked, you could say he or she sauntered, strutted, or shuffled. Ask yourself if there is a better way to say what you mean. If you believe that the epic hero Beowulf represents Christ, use some support from the text to buttress your belief.
Avoid making blanket statements about the literature without using the text as a basis.
Generally speaking to get good marks you have to do the following: To get an A* you need to be insightful, sensitive, convincing and evaluative.
For an A you need to be analytical and exploratory.
Double-check your work for grammatical and spelling errors.
Nothing more quickly detracts from well-expressed ideas than a paper fraught with misspellings and other such errors.
It can sometimes be challenging when producing a quality English literature essay. Scrutinize the text you are studying and identify themes that intrigue you and consider their effect on the narrative. Explore the spectrum of masculinity in the characters or the effect the absence of females has on the narrative.
Often times students struggle to find a starting point and write cohesively. Be experimental, creative and adventurous when researching your text and you’ll be amazed at how far it will take your essay.
Hopefully, this guide will help you decipher my comments.
(Be thankful you dont have to decipher my handwriting plus these abbreviations as my former students had to!